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brownspider

Age/Gender: 18, Male
Location: Brossard, QC Canada
Job: Student

I'm just a dude who enjoys writing. So far, I've written a play, a long short story, and even a musical to which I composed and played the music. I've also written a screenplay for a school project, which has been produced by us.

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12/27/07

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Blams: 187
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Voting Pow.: 5.41 votes

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Flash Reviews: 42
Music Reviews: 45
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Score: 10
Crotchless Chaps

"Awesome writing and animation"

submission: Crotchless Chaps
date: August 6, 2009

You got some good one-liners in this one. "Hepatitis &." Nice.

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Score: 10
Washing Machine emulator

"Original!"

date: July 23, 2009

This is one of the most original things I have ever seen on NewGrounds. Amazing job!

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Score: 10
Whizz Words

"Best word game ever"

submission: Whizz Words
date: July 16, 2009

Absolutely incredible job with this game. The best word game I've ever played, hands down. Nice easter egg when you spell "cow," by the way. Your wife must be ecstatic.

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Score: 10
schricktology

"Very funny"

submission: schricktology
date: June 21, 2009

Beautiful set-up, great overall comedic value. The animation was well suited. Awesome job on the whole.

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Score: 8
Triometry

"Controls..."

submission: Triometry
date: April 10, 2009

The graphics and sounds are nice, and it's a fun game, but that fact that you have to aim, move, and shoot with the mouse makes it quite difficult. Nearly all the lives I lost were because I was trying to aim at something and ended up moving into it.

April 10, 2009

Author's Response:

The controls make the game fun imo, because i tried making the ship move with the keys, but then the whole gameplay gets lost, imo ;)

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Score: 4
Fear Cologne

"...It was probably better in your head"

submission: Fear Cologne
date: March 29, 2009

The main reason I didn't find this funny is because it uses too many small jokes that are disconnected from the main "plot." Many of these are more ridiculous than funny.

I did, however, enjoy the fine print at the end. In all honesty, that made this Flash for me.

March 29, 2009

Author's Response:

I understand what you mean. More of a Family Guy thing than a South Park thing. Not enough plot, just disconnected jokes.

Thanks for the review! I was wondering how many people would actually read the fine print.

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Score: 8
Planaria on Drugs

"Your description is educational"

submission: Planaria on Drugs
date: March 5, 2009

You've taught me something today! Sick choice of music.

I thought this was well animated, and pretty cool. What do the planaria write at the end of the loop?

March 6, 2009

Author's Response:

Heh, thanks! It's Kwing (my name).

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Score: 8
Infinite Chamber

"Well inspired"

submission: Infinite Chamber
date: February 14, 2009

I really like this game, mainly due to the random level generation.

I have a few beefs, particularly with the jumping, which is way too floaty, if you get my drift (pun honestly not intended.). "Infinitely" is the correct spelling. I also think Infinite Chamber should have infinite lives, or some way to sacrifice score for lives, or difficulty starts, or passwords. The music also loops uncleanly.

I enjoy the GLaDOS-style machine. The wind was inspired from Super Mario Bros.: The Lost Levels, right? And the special lights from Blackout Basement in Donkey Kong Country? (Although it would be way more manageable if the player was still visible during the blackout.)

Anyway, awesome game, and I look forward to the sequel.

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Score: 3
ninja training 101

"BAD CONTROLS"

submission: ninja training 101
date: February 11, 2009

The layout makes the control scheme confusing. If you had a DDR-style setup, it might me more manageable. As it stands, this is not confusing to the point of being fun. Some music would also be much appreciated.

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Score: 4
Brain Teaser Quiz

"Don't break the continuity"

submission: Brain Teaser Quiz
date: January 31, 2009

You have some interesting brain teasers that I haven't seen before, but the arrangement in your quiz is a big problem. The quiz should not end when you get something wrong. You should just have a tally at the end, maybe with a time penalty for incorrect answers. As it is now, it's just a matter of remembering the answers and clicking them as quickly as you can. Within half an hour of this game's release, people have already been raping the scores, getting times under 10 seconds. Has this helped you develop your understanding of the leaderboard?

And for the number of sides in a circle question is too ambiguous, as 3 of the answers you've placed are acceptable.

February 1, 2009

Author's Response:

That's a great idea, thanks for the tips.

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